Story Review: Avalanche

Avalanche was written by Adrienne.  It was a really good story and I really liked it a lot.  

 Summary

It was about three friends who were going to be travelling to Whistler for a ski trip but before that, the one guy goes to a dance recital to see his girlfriend, and her previous boyfriend was there.  Once she saw him she ran off stage, so he went to go get her and they went to her favorite place, the bridge.  

Once there, her ex-boyfriend tries to run him over with a truck, when his attempt fails, he gets out and slaps the girl in the face.  She was scared, so he took her home.  Then he leaves to Whistler with his friends to go skiing in the mountains.  

At the mountains, an avalanche happens.  He ends up in the hospital, one of his friends ended up dead, and the police officer who was standing at his bed said it could`ve been an accident, or it could`ve been caused on purpose.  Which is intending that the ex-boyfriend might have done it.

Plot

The plot of the story was three friends who were headed on a ski trip to Whistler, Alberta, but it ends in disaster.

Setting

The setting of the story was in the winter, on the mountains.  Also, part of it was in an auditorium for dance. 

Conflict

The conflict of the story was the situation he got into with his girlfriend`s ex-boyfriend, then it turns into disaster on the mountains because of the avalanche, and his friend ends up dead and one ends up alive.


 My Opinion

So it was a very good ending, and a very good entire story.  I really liked reading it, and I think she should do a second story continuing on from what happened. 

I can`t really say anything bad about it, all the spelling was good, the grammar was good, and it kept me wanting to read.

My Overall Rating 

I would rate her story five stars out of five because she used really good words, it was quite intense, it was a page turner, it had a good ending, it held the subject, it had a conflict, it was entertaining, and I really enjoyed being able to read it.